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dionysian ecstasy

Posted: August 31st, 2011, 12:18 pm
by neologistic
let's garden the floor with wine, roll around in passions, cradle each others' worlds and glide into the writhing skin of each others' scents, ride a line of thickening clouds and dance in laughter's chase, you feed me fruits and she'll taste your fingers' juices, we'll watch dawn blush and hide behind trees and watch it lose a battle with disappearing mountain cover, make autumn think it's spring already and spread flowers peppered with cinnamon at the spirits in the hall, frolic into unending bliss for days and days

Re: dionysian ecstasy

Posted: August 31st, 2011, 8:30 pm
by Atehequa
Beautiful imagery.

Re: dionysian ecstasy

Posted: September 1st, 2011, 6:27 am
by saw
sounds good to me.....I like the language you use, it paints an escape from the mundane.... or worse.....which can't be a bad thing....was particularly fond of,

"garden the floor with wine"........very original

Re: dionysian ecstasy

Posted: September 1st, 2011, 9:41 am
by neologistic
Thanks, both, glad you all seemed to enjoy it. Just a fleeting daydream that escaped onto my screen, thought I'd share it

Re: dionysian ecstasy

Posted: September 1st, 2011, 10:43 am
by Kailashana
Yes! We both sing September's song, eh?

~A

Re: dionysian ecstasy

Posted: September 1st, 2011, 11:33 am
by judih
your share is my gain - thanks, neo

Re: dionysian ecstasy

Posted: September 1st, 2011, 3:55 pm
by Doreen Peri
lovely writing. as always :)

Re: dionysian ecstasy

Posted: September 1st, 2011, 4:04 pm
by neologistic
Thanks, guys :D

Re: dionysian ecstasy

Posted: September 1st, 2011, 6:57 pm
by theirishsea
Dionysian ecstasy has it all over Apollonian ecstasy.

Some nice imagery