UNCLEANED SINK.

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dadio
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UNCLEANED SINK.

Post by dadio » September 6th, 2011, 4:13 am

She loved Bach and listened
To him whenever she had the
Chance and while sitting listening
She gazed at her Picasso prints
And sipped the cola she mixed
With vodka and remembered
Ricans trying to make it with her
But she not interested in that
Side of being with him not wanting
To see the all too human side not
Wishing to see that aspect which
Made him all so much like everybody
Else just wanted that part of him
Which sat and listened to Bach and
Gazed at the Picasso prints sipping
Vodka and cola which she hoped made
Him think of higher things than sex
Drugs or the uncleaned bathroom sink.
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Re: UNCLEANED SINK.

Post by creativesoul » September 6th, 2011, 2:11 pm

personally i really like her-and the sink
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: UNCLEANED SINK.

Post by dadio » September 7th, 2011, 1:49 am

thank you, creativesoul

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Re: UNCLEANED SINK.

Post by theirishsea » September 7th, 2011, 9:03 am

Interesting---you always write a thoughtful poem----the sink image adds some layer of non-verbal meaning & context----it just does
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Re: UNCLEANED SINK.

Post by dadio » September 7th, 2011, 11:21 am

Thank you. 8)

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Re: UNCLEANED SINK.

Post by Kailashana » September 7th, 2011, 12:01 pm

Well, this time you pulled out the kitchen sink. :D

Love your vantage point, Terry.

~A

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Re: UNCLEANED SINK.

Post by dadio » September 7th, 2011, 12:07 pm

Thank you, Anna.

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