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UNCLEANED SINK.

Posted: September 6th, 2011, 4:13 am
by dadio
She loved Bach and listened
To him whenever she had the
Chance and while sitting listening
She gazed at her Picasso prints
And sipped the cola she mixed
With vodka and remembered
Ricans trying to make it with her
But she not interested in that
Side of being with him not wanting
To see the all too human side not
Wishing to see that aspect which
Made him all so much like everybody
Else just wanted that part of him
Which sat and listened to Bach and
Gazed at the Picasso prints sipping
Vodka and cola which she hoped made
Him think of higher things than sex
Drugs or the uncleaned bathroom sink.

Re: UNCLEANED SINK.

Posted: September 6th, 2011, 2:11 pm
by creativesoul
personally i really like her-and the sink

Re: UNCLEANED SINK.

Posted: September 7th, 2011, 1:49 am
by dadio
thank you, creativesoul

Re: UNCLEANED SINK.

Posted: September 7th, 2011, 9:03 am
by theirishsea
Interesting---you always write a thoughtful poem----the sink image adds some layer of non-verbal meaning & context----it just does

Re: UNCLEANED SINK.

Posted: September 7th, 2011, 11:21 am
by dadio
Thank you. 8)

Re: UNCLEANED SINK.

Posted: September 7th, 2011, 12:01 pm
by Kailashana
Well, this time you pulled out the kitchen sink. :D

Love your vantage point, Terry.

~A

Re: UNCLEANED SINK.

Posted: September 7th, 2011, 12:07 pm
by dadio
Thank you, Anna.