SEAVIEW BLUES.

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dadio
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SEAVIEW BLUES.

Post by dadio » September 8th, 2011, 12:01 pm

She stares out at the sea and you
Sit just behind taking in her green
Bikini and her brown hair tied back
In a ponytail and she says he drowned
One night out there someplace stupidly
Drunk after his stag party and hey they
Said hey why don’t walk out in the sea
And so he did and drowned and they
Just stood watching laughing thinking
He was waving out there but he was going
Down once twice thrice and then gone out
Of sight and then she is silent and you say
Nothing because you have no words to put
To the tragic tale and as you sit and stare
Taking in her cute butt and lovely curves
And tied back hair you think but do not
Say I’m glad I didn’t drown out there.
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Re: SEAVIEW BLUES.

Post by izeveryboyin » September 8th, 2011, 2:16 pm

Lucid. It seems to discuss a remorse for over-indulgences of life. Good piece
sometimes I just like to breathe.

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Re: SEAVIEW BLUES.

Post by dadio » September 8th, 2011, 3:18 pm

Thank you.

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