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the.../...sky ( for saw )

Posted: September 10th, 2011, 11:44 am
by the mingo
the neighbors are exploring the magic
of carpentry - the spirit within can't be owned
and belongs to everybody don't ya know ?
the sound of the passing traffic fading away
in our ears will be the last thing any of us will hear
the gizmo is a born coyote
carrying tribal chants & a saxophone & ya gotta
be careful not to spill water where people
can see it to turn ya in...it's not what ya say but !pull that knife! -
it's how ya say it or didn't ya know that poetry
is not words at all
but music so no smilin' now and don't look at me, you,
just get to work leave communication for those ain't left Africa yet
out in cool even cold europe we nobbing with the neanders
these cats conservative as all hell but it got them this far &
don't sell them short for lookin' the way they do & don't be surprised 'bout how
they can bring the market down on you
just because they are built close to the earth
and you are gracile
still, the real fun won't begin
'til we all get to america
man I can't wait to create alabama !
sitting next to a short-haired brunette driving a cadillac top down
who hands me a full clip for my AK-47 and know that she,
in her heart of hearts, be smilin' when I pull the trigger
to empty that clip all into the pursuit of happiness sky
attitude, man, attitude !

Re: the.../...sky ( for saw )

Posted: September 10th, 2011, 7:25 pm
by creativesoul
Nice write- hopefully - for you as well-

Re: the.../...sky ( for saw )

Posted: September 10th, 2011, 9:22 pm
by the mingo
Thx, I did have a good time with it - I just like it best when things just come out and you don't have to screw with anything - like it best that way when it comes to this kind of thing - pure nonsense - emphasis on pure. It's gotta have that rolling thunder quality or I just get bored. Straight from the hip. The "poetry", whatever that is, is already there. You just want to release that and then get the hell out of the way. Since you can't make a living with this shit you might as well have all the fun you can with it or you will miss about all you're to get. 8)

Re: the.../...sky ( for saw )

Posted: September 11th, 2011, 8:21 am
by Kailashana
Smiles.

"Get out of your own way" something I heard coming like a loud booming voice from nowhere while I was taking a shower many years ago. Something I've
been doing ever since.

Grazie.


~A

Re: the.../...sky ( for saw )

Posted: September 11th, 2011, 8:47 am
by the mingo
~A, and ya do it pretty up and walkin' good ! 8)

Re: the.../...sky ( for saw )

Posted: September 11th, 2011, 1:43 pm
by creativesoul
Poetry- the hidden secrets
Of culture love sweetness- comes floating off the words with mysterious kisses- thank you for your words here

Re: the.../...sky ( for saw )

Posted: September 11th, 2011, 6:31 pm
by saw
thanx for the nod, and completely agree with the stream of consciousness thing..

when things come to you rapid fire as if you are merely the vehicle, let it fly as stands....it's its own thing.... and doesn't need to be tweaked.....there may or may not be a higher purpose, but why take a chance fucking things up with our obsessive meddling.......good stuff

Re: the.../...sky ( for saw )

Posted: September 11th, 2011, 7:52 pm
by the mingo
8) saw & to you too cs 8)