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Humming

Posted: September 11th, 2011, 12:05 am
by creativesoul
There was the after shocks
Each time she shook down
Like the rage of pele -
Jealous and unrelenting
These lava like passions
Erupted like volcanic sulfer
Heated molton flows into the sea
Steam rises
Driving thru the rivers in waipio
Laughing in tree houses
Tickled pink by all that changed
Sad about things that did not end well-

Re: Humming

Posted: September 11th, 2011, 2:58 am
by dadio
Fine poem.

Re: Humming

Posted: September 16th, 2011, 3:55 am
by creativesoul
Maybe this is happily ever after
That lingering feeling
The one that prevents you from moving forward
That backing up industrial machine
Noise like an alarm
Screaming
Forklift my dreams to a new level
Swing around and dance
To a new ability to love
Let the grass grow greener on the other side
Or buy yet another lawnmower or fast toys
Women
Like love more than toys