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A working man

Posted: September 12th, 2011, 2:10 pm
by Kailashana
Your beard, rough, against my face
lover's sweat beading upon our bed,
lingering impressions, wheels in motion
calloused hands wrapped around my poem.

Re: A working man

Posted: September 13th, 2011, 11:08 pm
by judih
sweet rough embrace piece
lovely, anna

Re: A working man

Posted: September 14th, 2011, 2:37 am
by dadio
Well worked poem.

Re: A working man

Posted: September 14th, 2011, 4:11 pm
by mnaz
i like how you become the poem . . . effective economy / image . . .

Re: A working man

Posted: September 14th, 2011, 4:20 pm
by Kailashana
Thank you. Judith; thank you,Terry; thank you, Mnaz.

(And thank you Barry.)

~A