PROMISE MADE AND KEPT.

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dadio
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PROMISE MADE AND KEPT.

Post by dadio » September 13th, 2011, 10:04 am

She stood looking out
Across the small lake
With the late afternoon
Sun reflected in the water
And you beside her your
Hand in hers the sound of
Rooks from the high trees
A slight breeze touching
Tall branches and she said
Softly this is our lake this
Is ours to view and sit beside
And be together and promise
Me you’ll not come here with
Another she said looking from
The water into your hazel eyes
Promise me that and cross your
Heart and hope to die and you
Saw the two vivid reflections of
Yourself there in her bright blue
Eyes and you said yes I promise
I’ll never come here with another
And cross my heart and hope to die
And you never did even after she
Died of cancer and the lake you
Think has her there standing now
Gazing ghostly across the water’s
Skin thinking maybe of you both
And those days of love and youth
And both of you sitting and kissing
Beneath the vast sky’s blue roof.
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Atehequa
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Re: PROMISE MADE AND KEPT.

Post by Atehequa » September 13th, 2011, 1:08 pm

Good read

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Re: PROMISE MADE AND KEPT.

Post by dadio » September 13th, 2011, 1:16 pm

Thank you. :)

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