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rockin' the old

Posted: September 14th, 2011, 11:44 am
by the mingo
she rocked the surface
made the ground more solid
the grass more green
the sky higher
years & years ago
when some of the roads around here
were still hard packed gravel
and the river's songs
were not as old

Re: rockin' the old

Posted: September 14th, 2011, 7:52 pm
by saw
smoooooth.......

Re: rockin' the old

Posted: September 15th, 2011, 3:12 am
by creativesoul
Sweet

Re: rockin' the old

Posted: September 15th, 2011, 6:36 am
by the mingo
Thx, folks. 8)

Re: rockin' the old

Posted: September 15th, 2011, 7:01 am
by Kailashana
Really a wonderful sublime poem. Subtle.

Thank you.

~A

Re: rockin' the old

Posted: September 15th, 2011, 7:57 am
by the mingo
Thx, Anna & you're welcome. 8)