My Funny Valentine

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stilltrucking
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My Funny Valentine

Post by stilltrucking » February 11th, 2005, 3:10 am

I remember how I first saw your face
your website, it would load then something else a book, a paper, a picture or something would hide it. One thing lingered the smile,
Look Homeward Angel, "before I knew my mother's face...blah blah...before I was born into the blah blah the prison of this world.

and that world was Africa


"didn't mean to be unkind that was the last thing on my mind"

cowboy hat complexities

just a rodeo clown

a cat in a hat
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Post by stilltrucking » February 11th, 2005, 5:00 am

waltzing through the sinai,
evoluction is a theory and it is a sinister theory in some ways, race a not helpful concept I think. well here goes again


The Woman Who Was King

Hatshepsut

it was during her reign the word Israel shows up for in the first time in written history.

this is just crazy old jack's lament, my god you are beautiful, if only my IQ was forty points higher, and my age forty years younger I would be howling at the moon, outside your father's castle.

I just wanted you to know that.

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Behold the way our fine feathered friend
His virtue doth parade
Thou knowest not my dim-witted friend
The picture thou hast made
Thy vacant brow and thy tousled hair
Conceal thy good intent
Thou noble, upright, truthful, sincere
And slightly dopey gent

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Post by Doreen Peri » February 12th, 2005, 12:52 am

LR wrote this to me
In two thousand and three

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Happy Valentine

You are my heart of hearts
Solid as chocolate and muscle
You beat like a skin tight drum
You take my life apart

I’m a vessel of fire filled with your liquid
Shores of flame lapped by your susserant tide.
You turn me over from side to side
It’s like I went to heaven, then died.

My heart is yours; it thumps for you
It’s like a blossom held in bud
We are the perfect valentines
You a babe and me a stud.

(by LR)

heh ;)

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Post by judih » February 12th, 2005, 1:12 am

we don't do Valentines around here
but if we did
i'd want it to be funny

thanks, still
thanks, doreen and lrod

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Post by stilltrucking » February 12th, 2005, 5:13 pm

welcome judih
any day I can make you smile is a good day for me.

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