for the shattered air

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joel
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for the shattered air

Post by joel » September 27th, 2011, 9:45 am

As if a twig between— like shattered air—
my fingers, dry and snapped— like something rare—
the body of the morning woke my breath

while angels, in their fired mosquitoes' buzz,
would bleed-sing me their glory— there I was:
for puja, yawn— and groan for shibboleth.

But in that shattered air I recognized
a grounds for Love I'd only theorized
as moral quest or exercise in ethics:

what I breathe I have to give away
for you to breathe— and to prepare the way
for love you breathe to me to stay my death.
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"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

saw
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Re: for the shattered air

Post by saw » September 28th, 2011, 7:12 am

reminds me of something I read years ago, the source escapes me now...

" you only get to keep what you give away."
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

Kailashana
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Re: for the shattered air

Post by Kailashana » September 28th, 2011, 9:45 am

The living breath is until it isn't.

And poetry?

~A

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