LOVE OF MR CHOWDY

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dadio
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LOVE OF MR CHOWDY

Post by dadio » September 28th, 2011, 3:39 pm

You loved to hug Mr Chowdy;
You liked it when his wet nose
Brushed your chin or his long
Tongue licked your ear. Don’t let
The darn mutt bark too much,
Father said, or he’ll have to go
And sleep in the yard out in the
Doghouse. You used to feed him
From scraps saved from meals,
Or pushed him small pieces under
The table out of sight of the others.
Some evenings you managed to
Sneak him into your room and let
Him lie in comfort on your bed;
Listening out in case the parents
Came and turfed him off into
The kitchen or out in the cold.
Some nights you could hear his
Heavy breathing across the way
Beside the window where you let
Him lay. Now you’re much older
And Mr Chowdy’s dead; now it’s
Your husband’s snoring and heavy
Breathing that you hear in bed.
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Steve Plonk
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Re: LOVE OF MR CHOWDY

Post by Steve Plonk » October 2nd, 2011, 4:56 pm

Dadio, Great whimsical poem about a child's pet. Since I write many poems about animals and pets, I can appreciate it more than usual. The sad but comical line about the husband was especially poignant.

I hope that you, too, are an animal lover. The "father" of the young lady in
the illustration obviously wasn't much of a pet lover but "allowed" his daughter
to keep the pet. Not much mention of the chilld's mother, which you mention in other poems frequently. Good "feel" of the status of pets in some households.
Perhaps I read too much into the poem. I thought the dog's name ,"Mr. Chowdy" , was comical. :) :lol:

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Re: LOVE OF MR CHOWDY

Post by dadio » October 3rd, 2011, 1:41 am

Thank you, Steve for reading and your insightful comments.

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