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haphazard assessment

Posted: September 29th, 2011, 11:04 am
by saw
well, what do you say
when the fiber optics are severed
when civility is the last morsel
in the feedbag of communication

when ad-libbed ideas don't sound sincere
is turning the other ass cheek
part of evolution in a polite society
run amok, or am I just a good second story man

breaking into your head
without permission albeit without malicious
intent, a misdemeanor of reckless tongue
of feckless non consequences

in a long life of asked-for-it knocks
sucker punches, raps on the knuckles
from sister jo jo's leather ruler
her habit dripping with perspiration

lumps on the noggin of my very own
bobblehead bouncing violently in the rear
window of the lovemobile, lead foot
on the steel pedal, blue fingers

on the wheel, careening off the hopeless
guardrails, flipping on the sunroof, skidding
along the heartless macadam
as the deputy in charge of explanations

hides behind the billboard of reality
staring off into the dark highway space
of thunderclap road
radar gun in his lap.......set on "stun"

Re: haphazard assessment

Posted: September 30th, 2011, 3:37 am
by dadio
Good poem; enjoyed.

Re: haphazard assessment

Posted: October 3rd, 2011, 3:56 pm
by saw
thanx terry.....stream of consciousness poem........