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kiss

Posted: October 2nd, 2011, 7:34 am
by the mingo
o baby you want your images
a moon full of werepoets
traffic alligators taking their meals
pyramid-style hunger music
your brain & mine
portable dreams
i mean we couldn't get away
from them if we tried
lets go on speaking not to be understood
but to be heard

so whisper
so shout

don't dare me to go to the river
because I'll come back
and feed it's voice to you
in a kiss

you know it
and I know it too

Re: kiss

Posted: October 2nd, 2011, 9:19 am
by saw
this is great.....holds the magic throughout, trumpets the inevitable forces of love in a creative flow.....like a poetic Jack Webb...." just the facts maam"

Re: kiss

Posted: October 2nd, 2011, 6:34 pm
by the mingo
Thx, saw - glad ya enjoyed it. 8)

Re: kiss

Posted: October 2nd, 2011, 10:50 pm
by SadLuckDame
so then I'll say,
"I dare you to go to the river." :P
Made me happy to read this.

Re: kiss

Posted: October 2nd, 2011, 11:19 pm
by judih
"pyramid-style hunger music"

fantastic