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tea

Posted: November 1st, 2011, 6:38 pm
by creativesoul
the things that came out
when she was lost
walking down to a pool
water came brillantly
thru the silience
cooling the hot ideas of the past
simmering on a stove
was the tea
that somehow would relieve
the illness
yet alone
still
many years later
it seemed foolish
to dream brighter dreams

Re: tea

Posted: November 2nd, 2011, 3:21 am
by dadio
1st rate poem. enjoyed.