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~ Old flame ~

Posted: November 15th, 2011, 3:56 pm
by Vincy
Ignition
at first asking
a flickering sparkle
catching straw
and before you know
flames galore
and what's more
a fuming show
burnt out in time
like most flares go.

Re: ~ Old flame ~

Posted: November 15th, 2011, 8:50 pm
by constantine
enjoyed the economy - the title gives the reader a nudge towards a metaphorical direction.

Re: ~ Old flame ~

Posted: November 16th, 2011, 2:49 am
by dadio
Good poem & theme.