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liquid conciousness
Posted: November 19th, 2011, 7:23 pm
by Arcadia
mid spring
& everything´s leaving a drop
the skies, the bodies, the trees
seem to share again well known & misterious notes
in subtropicals dejavus,
yellow-night-lights mirrors
evaporating asphalts & heavy scents
where´s the wind?
be careful while you walk!
really?
Re: liquid conciousness
Posted: November 21st, 2011, 12:02 am
by judih
careful where i walk
snails slide underfoot
i'm sorry!
Re: liquid conciousness
Posted: November 21st, 2011, 4:58 am
by dadio
Good work.
Re: liquid conciousness
Posted: November 21st, 2011, 1:06 pm
by Arcadia
gracias for reading, you two!

I forgot the Spanish version ...
Mediados de primavera
y todo está a punto de solar una gota:
los cielos, los cuerpos, los árboles
parecen compartir otra vez
bien conocidas y a la vez misteriosas notas
en dejavus subtropicales.
Las luces amarillas de la noche reflejan
asfalto en evaporación y profundos perfumes ...
¿dónde está el viento?
¡tené cuidado al caminar!
¿en serio?
Re: liquid conciousness
Posted: November 21st, 2011, 2:36 pm
by the mingo
Re: liquid conciousness
Posted: November 22nd, 2011, 10:50 am
by saw
thoughts that ooze, liquid but thick like the unknown.....nice work