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liquid conciousness

Posted: November 19th, 2011, 7:23 pm
by Arcadia
mid spring
& everything´s leaving a drop
the skies, the bodies, the trees
seem to share again well known & misterious notes
in subtropicals dejavus,
yellow-night-lights mirrors
evaporating asphalts & heavy scents

where´s the wind?
be careful while you walk!
really?

Re: liquid conciousness

Posted: November 21st, 2011, 12:02 am
by judih
careful where i walk
snails slide underfoot
i'm sorry!

Re: liquid conciousness

Posted: November 21st, 2011, 4:58 am
by dadio
Good work.

Re: liquid conciousness

Posted: November 21st, 2011, 1:06 pm
by Arcadia
gracias for reading, you two! :D I forgot the Spanish version ... :roll: :lol:

Mediados de primavera
y todo está a punto de solar una gota:
los cielos, los cuerpos, los árboles
parecen compartir otra vez
bien conocidas y a la vez misteriosas notas
en dejavus subtropicales.

Las luces amarillas de la noche reflejan
asfalto en evaporación y profundos perfumes ...

¿dónde está el viento?
¡tené cuidado al caminar!
¿en serio?

Re: liquid conciousness

Posted: November 21st, 2011, 2:36 pm
by the mingo
8)

Re: liquid conciousness

Posted: November 22nd, 2011, 10:50 am
by saw
thoughts that ooze, liquid but thick like the unknown.....nice work