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I love you

Posted: November 23rd, 2011, 5:21 pm
by Kailashana
After all these years
the long road ahead
is shorter than the
vision I leave behind

I'm driving slower these days
walking to places
I have yet to go
with unwritten poems

the sky above me shaking
the ground below me
like dust
I gather myself
once more

to see the sunrise I can never
write into a poem

to feel the warmth of your love
I can never put into words.

Re: I love you

Posted: November 23rd, 2011, 8:14 pm
by saw
there is a beautiful sadness to this, yet the speaker seems to be in a healthy meditative state of mind......fine work

Re: I love you

Posted: November 24th, 2011, 4:28 am
by dadio
Love the poem & theme.