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every tree

Posted: November 26th, 2011, 2:48 am
by the mingo
before the first american advisors
ever walked the soil of Vietnam
my neighbors had a pony
it died
i don't know where it's buried.
some days it's not difficult for me at all
to hear a ghostly whinny
right on target just the way
i think of you as
the axe laid on the root
of every tree

Re: every tree

Posted: November 26th, 2011, 8:43 am
by dadio
Fine poem. 8)

Re: every tree

Posted: November 27th, 2011, 11:17 am
by the mingo
Thx Terry - 8)

Re: every tree

Posted: November 27th, 2011, 12:15 pm
by Lani
Deep...and fine... it pulls at my heart strings~

Re: every tree

Posted: November 27th, 2011, 5:49 pm
by saw
superb poem...full of emotion and mystery.....good elements for any writer....

Re: every tree

Posted: November 27th, 2011, 6:33 pm
by the mingo
Thx saw & Lani 8)