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postcard

Posted: December 6th, 2011, 1:54 pm
by the mingo
the ego dies a death like
a gutshot deer
its blood soaks back
into the soil
pieces of its deteriorating fur taken by the wind
scattered everywhere
but other times it's like a mountain
slowly wearing away
changing shape as it does so
it becomes a landmark
it becomes a postcard

Re: postcard

Posted: December 7th, 2011, 4:18 pm
by dadio
Fine capture. 8)

Re: postcard

Posted: December 12th, 2011, 9:30 pm
by mnaz
nothing like a mountain to put ego in its place ... how it dwarfs our span, and how in turn, time dwarfs the mountain. when those rock-tappers talk about "ancestral mountains," well, consider my mind properly blown ...