Dreaming: Risk of the Familiar

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magicmystery
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Dreaming: Risk of the Familiar

Post by magicmystery » February 14th, 2005, 4:15 am

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Dreaming: Risk of the Familiar

Understand the woman in me,
Like I love the man in you.
I need your strong arms around me,
Till my dreams and the night are through.

I need you close beside me,
All things now become new.
Confusion there in shadows.
Attempts to cloud my view,
And once again I risk familiar thoughts,
To find what's true.

A heartache caught me,
Looking up and seeing lights.
The tears could not keep them,
Beyond my sight.

I reached out a hand to touch,
The jewel within my grasp,
With a silent prayer of hope,
Still reeling from the last....
This flight, too, will pass.

At night I dream of oceans green
And violet ribbonned sky
And places I have only lived
In another time gone by....

And I dream of you....
In most familiar ways.
The kindness in your eyes,
The tenderness in your hands,
The way your smile lights up a room,
And the truth and calmness,
Inside your voice.
When you say, "I understand"

Understand the woman in me,
Like I love the man in you.
I need your strong arms around me,
Till my dreams and the night are through

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Post by mousey1 » February 14th, 2005, 2:36 pm

Very nice!

A goodly dream.

I'd share some of my dreams but they are, I daresay, a little riske.

Nice pic btw, I've got this thing for the moon. Eh, doesn't everybody!

Nice to see you.

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Post by ADannon » February 18th, 2005, 7:24 am

Very nice piece.......I like the repitition of the first verse as the last......very nice visuals and heart in this~

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