fuck YOU, asshole!

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fuck YOU, asshole!

Post by the mingo » January 17th, 2012, 3:11 am

i ripped her fucking heart out
clean out -
well, not quite, left a few roots in there
and those roots in there
they hated me for the rest of her life

she died without telling me
just up & died and
not even a "fuck you, asshole"

she's been dead over a year
and i'm still paying my
penitent dues
like i have done for decades

from this vantage point
i can say i would have much preferred
the simple "fuck YOU, asshole"

a simple "fuck YOU, asshole" is
quick, clean, over, & DONE with

a "fuck YOU,asshole" is priceless

believe me
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: fuck YOU, asshole!

Post by Kailashana » January 17th, 2012, 8:44 am

Death: The ultimate, fuck YOU, asshole! Nothing left to say, nothing that can be unsaid.

Cool poem Mingo... reminds me of my dear friend Larry, who died suddenly..very few men realized what a valuable adversary he was. Most women loved him, I think.

I know I did.

~A

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Re: fuck YOU, asshole!

Post by the mingo » January 17th, 2012, 11:22 am

Thx, ~A, you're right too. 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: fuck YOU, asshole!

Post by one of those jerks » January 17th, 2012, 12:32 pm

Her mother went to her grave cursing my name.
It was a short story by isaac bashevis singer
or so it seems to me now
or maybe it was a novel
Penitent as the Magician of Lublin

well written piece of writting
thanks for writing Steve.
just riffin dont mean nothing
She is twice the man I am.

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Re: fuck YOU, asshole!

Post by the mingo » January 17th, 2012, 4:45 pm

you're welcome Jack, glad you liked it.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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