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creativesoul
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soul less

Post by creativesoul » February 8th, 2012, 2:33 am

he never really had
anything
a life'
when he did= he threw it all away
destroyed anything that meant anything to him then he made up stories
about how it was everyone else s fault
when she warned him
he did not take her seriously

he came into her world
and took anything that gave her pleasure
then he tried to believe the lies
he told himself
they wiggled out of place
delusion after delusion just fell to the ground'
like teardrops
denial
anger
lust
all crushed in a pile
of stolen friends=a life she worked for
he just took it all
control
always crashes
into souless stares
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

saw
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Re: soul less

Post by saw » February 8th, 2012, 9:45 am

nicely done c-soul.....the last three lines are terrific....

control
always crashes
into soulless stares
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: soul less

Post by creativesoul » February 26th, 2012, 6:59 pm

thanks saw- aloha!!!
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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