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soul less

Posted: February 8th, 2012, 2:33 am
by creativesoul
he never really had
anything
a life'
when he did= he threw it all away
destroyed anything that meant anything to him then he made up stories
about how it was everyone else s fault
when she warned him
he did not take her seriously

he came into her world
and took anything that gave her pleasure
then he tried to believe the lies
he told himself
they wiggled out of place
delusion after delusion just fell to the ground'
like teardrops
denial
anger
lust
all crushed in a pile
of stolen friends=a life she worked for
he just took it all
control
always crashes
into souless stares

Re: soul less

Posted: February 8th, 2012, 9:45 am
by saw
nicely done c-soul.....the last three lines are terrific....

control
always crashes
into soulless stares

Re: soul less

Posted: February 26th, 2012, 6:59 pm
by creativesoul
thanks saw- aloha!!!