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creativesoul
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in the moment

Post by creativesoul » March 7th, 2012, 2:08 am

the river and i had been talking
for a few weeks
the rain came
joined in
the prayers were heard
the tears had dropped
a plan was made
the whole north shore flooded'
purification
2 yr long journey
=or3 anyway
it is done under the fun
people are finished
dinner is done.
the little crevice i had to hold onto
is now
full on happiness

im coming back to get my shit
tee hee hee
the little people and the spirits
jig is up
time to brave up and attack with no mercy
floods teach you things
like what to save
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

saw
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Re: in the moment

Post by saw » March 7th, 2012, 2:55 pm

charming jana !.....congrats.....aloha
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

creativesoul
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Re: in the moment

Post by creativesoul » March 10th, 2012, 1:12 pm

grazie :shock:
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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