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Wound

Posted: February 15th, 2005, 2:35 am
by Lucy!
It happened
Scarred me
Recently,
months later
I revisited the wound in my soul
I tried to heal it with your loving
And ultimate truth
But it didn't happen
Scarred me
So that I have another wound
Much deeper than the first


Lucy-
2-15-05

Re: Wound

Posted: January 27th, 2011, 12:16 pm
by dadio
I thought this an impressive poem.

Re: Wound

Posted: January 27th, 2011, 2:58 pm
by joel
Fighter's steppin' into the ring again, huh? Keep throwing poetic punches. Defend your face. Guard your guts. Spill the blood that gets you out safely--yours or your opponent's; spill it with verses of your strength and hope and life and love.

Sometime when my wife and I come down to the city, maybe we could meet for lunch...I'd love to sit in the arena and watch you fight in real time with real words. Prayers and support!