falling time

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e_dog
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falling time

Post by e_dog » March 18th, 2012, 3:30 am

feel like i've fallen
down the well of time.
maybe it's a copper mine.

you know you're really
losin' the battle
'gainst depression
when e'en Mingus don't
cheer you up.

lifting spirits ain't
as easy as lifting
a
glass.
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.

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stilltrucking
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Re: falling time

Post by stilltrucking » March 18th, 2012, 9:52 am

I'll drink to that.

another drink from the well of time
to drown out the beat of the drum of time

everything is metaphor
I guess.

thanks for the poem,
thanks again
only thing cheers me up these days is sunshine, shiner bok and tea.
and poetry when I can't get nothing else
thank you I missed your poems, seems like you hardly post any on this board.
They always seem to cheer me up
they keep my younger self from mourning myself.

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e_dog
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Re: falling time

Post by e_dog » March 18th, 2012, 4:01 pm

thanks, stilltru'

much appretiate yer appreciation.
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.

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