the daylight that kills us with passing

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Kailashana
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the daylight that kills us with passing

Post by Kailashana » March 20th, 2012, 8:11 am

Let me see.
If I sit down in front of my laptop,
with my fingers on the keyboard,
will I begin to write with the urgency
of my lips?
Will they speak of my love
for you in the braille of my fingertips,
outlining the image of you forever
transmigrated in my heart?
Will I go a thousand kisses deep
with Cohen and feed you orange blossoms
of our redemption?

My love, do you remember the shards we put together,
one by one, lacerating our tongues? The
exquisite torture of becoming lovers, again.

The last line of this poem?


~A

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Re: the daylight that kills us with passing

Post by creativesoul » March 20th, 2012, 11:35 am

nice,,
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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dadio
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Re: the daylight that kills us with passing

Post by dadio » March 21st, 2012, 3:24 am

Sad. Good poem.

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sonofthesun
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Re: the daylight that kills us with passing

Post by sonofthesun » March 21st, 2012, 3:28 am

beautiful. smiles. glad i read this
There is no empty space

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