so you think you know me, huh ?

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saw
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so you think you know me, huh ?

Post by saw » March 30th, 2012, 8:13 am

I know people so arrogant
they think they know me,
they preach to me, flim flam
fleeces with pretty mouths
glaring gold teeth, that
self-absorbed gleam of wiki-wisdom
gigolo gurus with a stocked
arsenal of new age buzz words,
a portfolio of all the best How-To
schlock that bores me to weeping,
my head is full of wailing guitars
thumping bass, organs stoked by fingers
wide open for penetration, cells drop
their robes, and I see the raw guts
and they say to me, take me here and now...
I understand, I must keep the jam alive
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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dadio
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Re: so you think you know me, huh ?

Post by dadio » March 31st, 2012, 4:42 am

Punchy poem. Enjoyed. 8)

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Re: so you think you know me, huh ?

Post by creativesoul » March 31st, 2012, 7:10 am

now i like this-
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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