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stand up

Posted: April 20th, 2012, 3:25 am
by creativesoul
duh
i hadda stand up for what i believed
even at the risk of falling down

when i fell i hadda ask fer help see

then one day


i was standing up on a paddle board in the sea
just mind fucking blown at how good this is
my friends fly on boards in the wind

hadda leave behind the duh crowd'

joined up with the water people
surfers and fisherman
hikers and swimmers

the duh crowd is still wondering 'what happened'

Re: stand up

Posted: April 20th, 2012, 4:49 am
by stilltrucking
I admire your courage
thank you for writing

Re: stand up

Posted: April 23rd, 2012, 2:34 am
by dadio
Good down to earth poetry 8)

Re: stand up

Posted: April 23rd, 2012, 4:45 am
by creativesoul
thanx- 8)

Re: stand up

Posted: April 23rd, 2012, 11:40 am
by the mingo
8)

Re: stand up

Posted: April 23rd, 2012, 11:34 pm
by creativesoul
stand up comedy- 'babe..i took viagra for you'



does that mean something?
no can stand up?