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still have trouble

Posted: April 26th, 2012, 10:27 am
by the mingo
factories are places where things spin
a poem is a truck driver
who rides the spin regardless of load
language is a kind of animal
that breathes out weather
and for those who can't get out to the rain
living dirty is all that's left to them
questions stand for answers but
inundated by photons as I am
I still have trouble
reading beneath the storm

Re: still have trouble

Posted: April 26th, 2012, 10:58 am
by stilltrucking
beneath the lines
between the storms
we need the rain
inundated by photons as I am
I still have trouble
old man river got nothing to do but roll around heaven all day
lost in the photons all the tiny pieces that i am reading as I type
I wonder who I am the random photon that makes it to your retina



deadhead is a hard way to go
but somebody got to do it 8)

"trying to catch the devil's herd
or with us you will ride"

Re: still have trouble

Posted: April 26th, 2012, 11:07 am
by stilltrucking
sorry about the multiple replies,
I found it irrisistible not to reply to it
thank you for the poem
you do wonders with photonic words.

Re: still have trouble

Posted: November 1st, 2012, 4:26 pm
by zero_hero
photo tonic snake oil medicine and living dirty
questions not answers
Socrates' breath mints
smiling Buddha boys ain't got all the answers
but dang me, take a rope and hang me if they don't ask good questions

take me down to ECT
shuffle my mp3's
I am not the one to judge
i shine it on
so many photons, vibrations and kamikazies coming in
I got to shower in lysergic acid every day

no just shucking an jiving
riffin and ramblin
cause I likes your poet tree 8)
don't mean nothing just a GO

Trouble?

...only death is no trouble (zorba the greek)

Re: still have trouble

Posted: November 1st, 2012, 7:05 pm
by constantine
photons give me the willies. i've been living dirty in mongolia and it ain't all that

Re: still have trouble

Posted: November 1st, 2012, 11:11 pm
by Arcadia
you have beautiful eyes, mingo! :D (don“t worry about the reading! :wink:)

Re: still have trouble

Posted: November 2nd, 2012, 4:15 am
by dadio
That's the way. Good poem 8)

Re: still have trouble

Posted: November 3rd, 2012, 1:38 am
by creativesoul
get down- nice- really liked that :mrgreen: