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5 damn minutes

Posted: May 1st, 2012, 11:56 am
by the mingo
things most often
go convoluted beyond unraveling
just when all you need
is the straightest of lines
not forever or even all day
just for five minutes
five damn minutes

Re: 5 damn minutes

Posted: May 2nd, 2012, 6:06 am
by SadLuckDame
Yes! Just five damn minutes.
Thank you, mingo.

Re: 5 damn minutes

Posted: May 2nd, 2012, 1:03 pm
by creativesoul
measuring my time
weighing time indifferently with the things that normal people expect from you every day throwing a sack of rocks on my back of responsability
that if i just dont freak out maybe things will lighten up
those five minutes can be hours with that sack of rock on my back
but inside what i once thought was rocks
was only thoughts i carried like rocks when i went there
one day

seems like five minutes ago
value the time you have
i hear it often
so with this moment
i breathe
way better than last month
my hair was shorter then
that was when i was with
when i lived in that house....
when he loved me
when i loved him
when she hated us both
all times
of five minute decisions

Re: 5 damn minutes

Posted: May 3rd, 2012, 12:50 am
by the mingo
Thx ladies 8)

Re: 5 damn minutes

Posted: May 5th, 2012, 9:10 am
by Arcadia
:)

Re: 5 damn minutes

Posted: May 5th, 2012, 12:06 pm
by Steve Plonk
Great lines, Mingo & Creative Soul. 8)