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Down The Road

Posted: May 3rd, 2012, 8:08 am
by theirishsea
down the road
the wind begging
for release

you can see it
struggling to get free
from the trees

you can feel it pawing
your face
searching
for compassion

your seashell of an ear
can feel it whip through
your soul

soul?
the wind

Re: Down The Road

Posted: May 3rd, 2012, 6:27 pm
by creativesoul
interesting, that feeling of restlessness in the soul like wind- never can hold it down, it is so vaporous- like the mystery of fire and love- :!:

Re: Down The Road

Posted: May 3rd, 2012, 7:26 pm
by stilltrucking
a million mile poem :D 8)
thank for writing.

A restless soul in the wind. a live forever feeling in the wind.


When I was living on the road and I was passing through some town where I had a few friends, it was hard to get back into the truck after a few days off. This was a million mile song for me. It got me out of town and on the road again. Sorry this is only a coincidence of titles but your poem brought the song to mind.

Down the road when life was in the wind

Re: Down The Road

Posted: May 4th, 2012, 8:16 pm
by creativesoul
WELL I AM KINDA AN INDIAN AND WELL THE COWBOYS AND I- UHG WELL- ANYWAYS- song is nice... [lying] i hate that kind of music= i love it that you share what it did for you and your personal glimmer of sight into this often wild and crazy world- truckers were kind of ... well- a hippie =indian girl s like me- friend.... aloha :mrgreen:

Re: Down The Road

Posted: May 5th, 2012, 8:58 am
by Arcadia
wow!, amazing poem, theirishsea!! :D