on being alive

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sweetwater
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on being alive

Post by sweetwater » June 21st, 2012, 12:07 pm

everyone should be equal
in how he marvels at the wonder
of being alive

sitting by a window at dusk
with a lingering afterthought of how
time creates iteself anew
again and again

and how it disappears
only to reappear again
into the heart that is still beating
as the sun sets and the day
fades into twilight

and how we enrich ourselves with the memories
and with the dreams we have created
and shape love into night until dawn

singing amazed in our vast existence
that has become our adventure

the hero of the heart

the soul's history and wondrous story

and all the poems written about the years
that pass

words written while being alive

and full with living

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dadio
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Re: on being alive

Post by dadio » June 22nd, 2012, 3:06 am

Excellent poem & theme

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Re: on being alive

Post by creativesoul » June 28th, 2012, 8:11 pm

love my life today- my old one had to die hard for me to embrace the one i got now- love your writing
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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