i listen (ellipsis) to her snore

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YABYUM
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i listen (ellipsis) to her snore

Post by YABYUM » June 22nd, 2012, 3:11 am

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i listen to her
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i hear her
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i hold her when i can enjoying tight squeez of feeted soul
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i talk about her when i having audience eyes of seeing goal
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i love is an expression made by our species
i love is over said
i love is not good enough
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i know her.
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Re: i listen (ellipsis) to her snore

Post by YABYUM » June 22nd, 2012, 3:32 am

this is terrible. stop righting.
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Re: i listen (ellipsis) to her snore

Post by the mingo » June 24th, 2012, 6:01 am

8) not terrible -
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Re: i listen (ellipsis) to her snore

Post by Arcadia » June 24th, 2012, 12:26 pm

sounds true, yabyum! :D

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