a word hangs

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minfin
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a word hangs

Post by minfin » February 19th, 2005, 1:35 am

balanced on a thought like metal
bowing out like the tension on a fly rod
suspended on a wire
counterbalanced with an image
supporting a metaphor
spinning from the weight and inertia
a thought like a shining mirror
a pond tucked down in the valley
between verses of evergreen
and wisps of sky now refected

smell the berries and the pinecones
see the nymphs and the rainbow
watch the sky break out in ripples and summer come back as a memory
of peepers and cicada calling
what katy did.
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Post by judih » February 19th, 2005, 1:41 am

hey minfin
so good to hear the buzz in your words
care to join the soft sweet jam upstairs?
with or without coffee
the garden awaits

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thought i was there

Post by minfin » February 19th, 2005, 1:55 am

but i'm not,guess why?
i hit new topic instead of reply

there's a bed in this room and I am going to find it
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Post by judih » February 19th, 2005, 1:57 am

nu top pick
i can dig git
min fin unconfor min

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