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snap, crackle and pop

Posted: July 15th, 2012, 4:44 am
by creativesoul
the little thoughts had legs
they ran away from anything with a shadow
the seas were rolling in sweet waves
the spooky things lay under the bed
the brides of many men
waited on the beach
for the ship that never arrives
the fantasy of white picket fences wore thin
became the leggings on an old woman at a bus stop

Re: snap, crackle and pop

Posted: July 15th, 2012, 9:01 am
by the mingo
8)

Re: snap, crackle and pop

Posted: September 13th, 2012, 3:12 am
by dadio
Fine poem.

Re: snap, crackle and pop

Posted: September 13th, 2012, 4:09 pm
by creativesoul
Thank you..

Re: snap, crackle and pop

Posted: September 14th, 2012, 8:07 pm
by gypsyjoker
touched me
8)
thank you for writing


Re: snap, crackle and pop

Posted: September 14th, 2012, 10:56 pm
by justwalt

Re: snap, crackle and pop

Posted: September 15th, 2012, 7:30 pm
by creativesoul
Nice posts !!!! Crossing invisible bridges... Thanks

Re: snap, crackle and pop

Posted: September 15th, 2012, 7:33 pm
by creativesoul
The sun is going down... Dreams come true