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LOVE HER STILL

Posted: October 4th, 2012, 2:54 pm
by dadio
You never expected
your mother to die
although the hospital
hinted at such

all lost
in their
language trap
all in all

it was a double blow
as dementia took her
piece by piece
years ago

then the final punch
the knock out blow
remembering
someone saying

that’s how
some loved ones
tend to go
and the relationship

between mother and child
is never simple
travelling as it does
through high hills

and valleys sometimes
dark and often deep
and remembering
all that

the need to weep
you reflect on all that
the final sight
of your mother

in that bed
the closed eyes
the small smile
remain in your head

and you know
after all such
you loved her overmuch
and always will

indeed
you love her still.

Re: LOVE HER STILL

Posted: October 9th, 2012, 8:01 am
by theirishsea
Must be a typo here:

all lost
in the their
language trap
all in all


Another touching poem.

Re: LOVE HER STILL

Posted: October 9th, 2012, 5:03 pm
by SadLuckDame
This was heart-felt.
Thank you, Dadio.

Re: LOVE HER STILL

Posted: October 10th, 2012, 2:57 am
by creativesoul
i watched as she faded into another world- my granny- nice write

Re: LOVE HER STILL

Posted: October 10th, 2012, 6:51 am
by dadio
Thank you, theirishsea, SadLuckDame & creativesoul. I have edited the typo.