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The Conversation

Posted: October 8th, 2012, 2:26 pm
by edsiejka
The Conversation

by Edmund Siejka

Swaying to the motion of the train
I look around
Jostled by the crowd I move aside when nudged
Smile when someone takes a seat
Studying my hands
Nothing has changed
Still five fingers on each hand
Looking down I see my shoes
Nothing remarkable or unremarkable
Just a pair of plain shoes.

Hearing conversations
I turn to listen
The first conversation doesn’t interest me
On my other side is a middle aged couple
Holding hands
Choosing to eavesdrop
I lean forward
Perched like an ancient bird of prey
With an incredible need
To hear what they are saying
So much so
That I forget the swaying of the train
The pushing, nudging and shoving
The heavy breathing on my neck
The sounds and smells
Of a living and moving
Steel monster.

Re: The Conversation

Posted: October 9th, 2012, 1:20 am
by judih
enjoyed this piece, edmond!

Re: The Conversation

Posted: October 12th, 2012, 10:33 am
by sweetwater
some conversations like poems
that express the simplicity of being

hey you

Re: The Conversation

Posted: October 18th, 2012, 1:03 am
by creativesoul
nice ride