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schrieb ©

Posted: November 3rd, 2012, 2:05 pm
by sweetwater
dreamy steamy soft silhouetta
beating da meeting of musty brunetta
amazon rulin the fulein schoolin
warm in da lesson of wondrous coolin
mountainous wander and wonder and ponder
steppin no stoppin da flight of da condor...
smacka da smoolie boolie soft silhouetta
dose who da booda gouda beata
tarz amazon juniper schoolin foolin
floundering mountainous munn key

Re: schrieb ©

Posted: November 3rd, 2012, 11:19 pm
by theirishsea
Don't know about the title----German for write---

though some of the rhyming is overdone in the end----this may just have been fun to write----but there are some nice lines

dreamy steamy soft silhouetta
beating da meeting of musty brunetta


I like those opening lines--- to me they sound good
mountainous wander and wonder and ponder

interesting progression of thought in this one line
floundering mountainous munn key

no idea what that line means but what it suggests is interesting. The only thing I could find for munn is the actress Olivia Munn but ?---however interesting play nonetheless

Re: schrieb ©

Posted: November 4th, 2012, 12:45 am
by justwalt
always gotta watch them floundering munn keies