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david
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The Gang

Post by david » November 16th, 2012, 11:30 am

They called me a puff,
got one of the little slags to take me into their den,
then lined up to smell my fingers and wrinkle their faces.
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dadio
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Re: The Gang

Post by dadio » November 16th, 2012, 12:18 pm

V, good, 8)
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david
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Re: The Gang

Post by david » November 17th, 2012, 12:06 pm

thank-you....Dadio.....d
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Atehequa
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Re: The Gang

Post by Atehequa » November 18th, 2012, 7:58 am

Pretty cool, enjoyable, but weird at the same time.
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david
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Re: The Gang

Post by david » November 18th, 2012, 12:57 pm

Atehequa wrote:Pretty cool, enjoyable, but weird at the same time.
like my narrators experience eh? hahahhaa

thanks for the read and post Atehequa.....D
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Re: The Gang

Post by Doreen Peri » November 18th, 2012, 1:40 pm

What an image! LOL ... I mean, it's quite vivid. I have to look up the various meanings for "puff".

Welcome to the Studio, David! Good to see you here.
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Re: The Gang

Post by david » November 19th, 2012, 6:56 am

hiya Doreen, it can mean "gay" here....seeya...d
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