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crackhead
Posted: November 19th, 2012, 12:57 pm
by david
I'll blow you for 25 quid she said
or 30 for a bare shaft
then knelt down among the dogends and rusty cans,
her hand with blackened pipe burns
cupped his ass.
Re: crackhead
Posted: November 19th, 2012, 4:55 pm
by revolutionrabbit
her crack cracked cracking ass
pass the numb numbing glass
Re: crackhead
Posted: November 21st, 2012, 7:40 am
by dadio
Has that Bill Burroughs touch. V Good.

Re: crackhead
Posted: November 21st, 2012, 9:24 am
by Atehequa
Good poem.
They always remind me of soulless zombies existing for naught but another hit off the crack pipe.
Re: crackhead
Posted: November 22nd, 2012, 1:04 pm
by david
Revolution
Dadio
Atehequa
Thanks for your reads and posts....
happy that "SOULLESS " quality came through it was my aim.....D
Re: crackhead
Posted: November 22nd, 2012, 4:13 pm
by sweetwater
henri miller might have thought of it first
Re: crackhead
Posted: November 23rd, 2012, 6:54 pm
by david
thanks Sweetwater I shall check him out...D