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NO MORE ECHOES

Posted: November 29th, 2012, 3:55 pm
by dadio
Two mental breakdowns
In as many years;
The ECT, she
Knows too well; the dark

Corridors; the sharp
Broken mirrors, all
Reflecting different
Selves; the slashed wrist;

Bath-almost-drowning
Business; the white
Coated nurse and docs
And the tricks up their

Long thin sleeves; and the
Emptiness inside
With the long slow fall
Into that so long

Awaited and wished for
Oblivion and
No more echoes from
The sad ghostly dead.

Re: NO MORE ECHOES

Posted: November 29th, 2012, 4:15 pm
by stilltrucking
a good capture I think
:(
"Is there no way out of the mind? "Sylvia Somebody

Re: NO MORE ECHOES

Posted: November 30th, 2012, 3:04 am
by dadio
Thank you, stilltrucking.

Re: NO MORE ECHOES

Posted: December 1st, 2012, 8:01 am
by Atehequa
Quite enjoyable and always interesting, dadio.

Re: NO MORE ECHOES

Posted: December 1st, 2012, 8:56 am
by dadio
Thank you, Atehequa.