JUDITH AND YOU AND THE SUMMER SKY.

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JUDITH AND YOU AND THE SUMMER SKY.

Post by dadio » December 14th, 2012, 3:30 am

You were lying on your back
on the grass beside Judith
three days after
the start

of the summer holidays
she was talking
about some girl
in her class at school

who wore stockings
instead of socks
and how her mother
thought that

(the wearing of stockings)
was quite too much
too grown up
and you were watching

the formation of the clouds
and how they changed shape
and colouring
becoming darker

then paler
and now and then
a bird would fly
across your vision

and you
only half listening
to her as she spoke
her words

touching your ears
her voice
like a kind of music
there lulling you

and you heard also
in the distance
the sound of a train
its puffing of steam

the sharp sound
of a horn
as it went by
the crossing

somewhere down
the track
but I wouldn’t wear stockings
Judith said

I like fresh air
getting to my legs
you have nice legs
you said

have I?
she said
yes
you said

right up to where
I can’t see no more
and she laughed
and smacked

at your arm
beside her
if my mother
could hear you

she’d not
let me near you again
a rook flew over head
its darkness in contrast

to the blue of sky
if she saw us last Sunday
she’d locked you up
you said

and Judith touched
your hand
next to hers
and held it

she mustn’t know
she whispered
course not
you said

well least not
until you’re fifty two maybe
and she laughed
and her laughter

disturbed the birds
and kind of
dissolved the cloud formation
into blueness

and you loved her
nearness
her touch
her being there

beneath clouds
and birds
and sky
and maybe always will

you thought
until the day we die.
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Re: JUDITH AND YOU AND THE SUMMER SKY.

Post by Cenacle » December 14th, 2012, 9:21 am

Wow, you brought back young love to me in a vivid, overwhelming way. Just lovely.

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Re: JUDITH AND YOU AND THE SUMMER SKY.

Post by dadio » December 14th, 2012, 3:01 pm

Thank you, Cenacle.

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Re: JUDITH AND YOU AND THE SUMMER SKY.

Post by david » December 16th, 2012, 12:26 pm

Tell, I have read a lot of your poems now and consider this one of the best, it has it all, thanks pal...D

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Re: JUDITH AND YOU AND THE SUMMER SKY.

Post by dadio » December 16th, 2012, 2:50 pm

Thank you, David. 8)

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