DOTTIE DARNING IN THOUGHTFUL MOOD.

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dadio
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DOTTIE DARNING IN THOUGHTFUL MOOD.

Post by dadio » December 16th, 2012, 4:14 pm

Willie’s walked to the village,
Dottie sits darning stockings
by the window, her nimble

fingers pulling and pushing
the yarn through the cloth.
Sunlight brightens up the

length of her lap, warms
her fingers, brings touch
of Heaven. She pauses,

holds needle in mid sew,
watches a butterfly, Red
Admiral, flitter by the

window’s square. If only
Willie was there. He was
up early, up and out in

the garden’s span, digging
and planting, she watching,
taking in his moving arms,

his steady hands. She still
feels the damp place his
kiss gave, on forehead above

her brow, feels it still, anyhow.
She resumes the darning of
her brother’s cloth, the sharp

needle pulled and pushed,
the fingers holding firm, the
in and out, of the narrowing

hole, the closing up. She looks
at the trees, the slight sway
of arms, the green covered

fingers, how she and Willie
sat beneath by the near shore,
sheltered by tall willows, the

sea view soaking their eyes, his
hand in hers, birdsong, distant
ship on horizon’s brow. If only
Willie was here, was here now.
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Re: DOTTIE DARNING IN THOUGHTFUL MOOD.

Post by david » December 18th, 2012, 4:29 am

Sunlight brightens up the

length of her lap


loved this Tell...D

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Re: DOTTIE DARNING IN THOUGHTFUL MOOD.

Post by dadio » December 18th, 2012, 9:31 am

Thank you, David.

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