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talk to me

Posted: February 16th, 2013, 9:12 am
by saw
just language....
of course not
not merely grammatical rules
not only the pomp and circumstance
of vocabulary, rather
an EXPLOSION, the human spirit
spewed by a healthy cough,
particles of humanity blown
into the consciousness, into
the vegetation,
very old growth trees
stand long and tall and smiling
a watershed of imagination reflects
a complete ecosystem
with many spiritual roads
yet to travel, caught up
in the spokes.....
of the spinning wheel

Re: talk to me

Posted: February 16th, 2013, 1:51 pm
by stilltrucking
a healthy cough
a lucky strike
a good poem
8)

Re: talk to me

Posted: February 16th, 2013, 4:15 pm
by dadio
a complete ecosystem
with many spiritual roads
yet to travel...

Splendid 8) poem

Re: talk to me

Posted: February 18th, 2013, 2:18 pm
by justwalt