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feelings first

Posted: February 17th, 2013, 6:02 am
by david
Snake of river mist
rising from the S bend
as dawn
renders the invisible visible;

doe with fawn, poetry
on the periphery
of the waters edge

and there, at the treeline,
almost camouflaged,
dappled hide like spots of sunshine
on the forest floor
his antlers a spread of branches
the buck.

Re: feelings first

Posted: February 17th, 2013, 2:42 pm
by justwalt
feelings first... works better than thought

Re: feelings first

Posted: February 17th, 2013, 3:47 pm
by saw
nice image