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gun stomach

Posted: February 19th, 2013, 10:49 am
by the mingo
with large guns the words come
equal in existence
with simples & sisters & elastic amusements
who are we but playgrounds for them
the music has muscle and driving by we drop in
the women with their animal pockets,
make a slight gypsy adjustment
to the earth where no army
can make argument
nor first fish make math
it is a fertile station
with huge steam pipes
running beneath
and the tall water birds of history
avoid any behavior
that does not help
something into their stomachs

Re: gun stomach

Posted: February 19th, 2013, 12:06 pm
by constantine
decent! i particularly like the end sequence, but the whole thing is fresh and has substance.

Re: gun stomach

Posted: February 20th, 2013, 6:35 pm
by saw
highly original with ample mystery octane to compel the reader to dig in....

Re: gun stomach

Posted: February 21st, 2013, 11:28 am
by the mingo
thx gentleman - i appreciate it