Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

The screams of the women
brought us rushing
from the house;

but it was all over,
just the toddlers shoe

tumbling toe over heel,
toe over heel.

good capture
a hell of a poem
thanks for the excellent poem
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first thoughts second thoughts
I my first thought was bloody hell but i thought that sounded like I was trying to patronize you

I think I have been there. Good poem, David.