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10:05 a.m.

Posted: March 3rd, 2013, 11:11 am
by the mingo
10:05 a.m.

we each take our positions
stripped of all nonsense
you to doze & wait developments
me to begin drinking coffee

if i were
talking to myself
i'd say don't even
think about it

Re: 10:05 a.m.

Posted: March 6th, 2013, 4:03 pm
by dadio
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Re: 10:05 a.m.

Posted: March 12th, 2013, 7:46 am
by saw
sweet ...

Re: 10:05 a.m.

Posted: March 15th, 2013, 10:20 am
by theirishsea
Second stanza is superb understatement.